The first section of this chapter was very graphic and I was quite upset by the treatment of a child.The rest was very believable and excellent writing.
Author's Response: Yes, it was quite horrible. I really wanted to emphasize the prejudice and mistreatment werewolves faced in the Wizarding community. They didn't have a choice and, yet, were made pariahs. Many didn't see or treat them as people and that was what I tried to portray in that scene. Thank you so much for your review, encouragement, and continued interest in my story! I hope I continue to provide you with enjoyable reading.
This story is absolutely wonderful! I usually try to avoid stories with warnings about character death but your writing is amazing. It really touched me and I'll be waiting for your next update anxiously!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Rest assured that the character deaths are limited to those that occurred in the books. Thank you for your review and I will try to get the next chapter up soon!
I am not a fan of stories that jump through time, but thiis was very well done. I am not quite sure if someone could drink three bottles of firewhiskey at one sitting and stay awake.
Author's Response: Hahaha, yeah, I guess it would depend on the size of the bottle. :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story, even though it was out of your 'comfort zone,' and I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks so much for the review!