Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/03/13 5:57
Chapter: Beginnings

Severus seems very normal so far. I cannot believe Lily has only one dress. She strikes me as being very feminine.

Author's Response: Well that's the thing: I hope to show that it was the school that changed him, rather than his true character shining through. Just wait and see.... On the Lily front, Lily strikes me as being pretty feminine too, as quite a young girl and then when she's older, but every girl goes through a tomboy phase. Plus, I would say maybe she's just had a growth spurt and had to get rid of all her dresses because they got too small, but she'll get some hand-me-downs from Petunia soon. *brain in overdrive* Anyway thanks for the review!

Reviewer: dmbw7052
Date: 08/02/13 23:10
Chapter: Beginnings

Hey BP!
Just thought I'd tell you that your story is amazing! I reallly like how you switch perspectives. Can't wait to read more!
-Georgia

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like the perspective switching - it was definitely the thing I worried about most. Hopefully there'll be some more up for you soon!

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