Reviews For Salire
Reviewer: Dad
Date: 05/16/13 8:25
Chapter: Salire

Not a poetry person, but I like this one.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! :) That means a lot to me that you took the time to read and review. I wish a good day!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 05/16/13 3:50
Chapter: Salire

I'm guessing this is Ron, except some parts of it don;t quite ring true (the famous witches blushing at his presence, for instance) But he did have a large collection of chocolate frog cards, and he was the sixth son ... hmmmmm ...

Whoever it is, this is a lovely poem, quite heart rending for the poor boy whose only wish is to be remembered (which he will be if it is Ron) I especially like the stanza beginning 'Now life is just a hunt for those delicate frogs' because it seems to encapsulate the whole wonder and fascination of the magical world.

Well done ~Carole~

Author's Response: Yes, I realize that witches don't blush at his presence, but since it was from the perspective of Ron, and he was talking about how his chocolate frog cards make him feel special, I thought it might be okay to skew a bit of the truth, since he probably tries to see things his way. I hope that is a good explanation... Anyways, thank you so much for your review! :)

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