Reviewer: teh tarik
Date: 06/09/13 19:20
Chapter: Mac the Knife

Hey there, I was just randomly browsing around and saw the pairing in your summary and was intrigued, so I dropped by!

Well, you've certainly got my interest piqued. This is such an amazing start; Katie's characterisation is really quite wonderful and detailed. You've done a great job portraying her restlessness, her ennui and that sense of unease with her past (i.e. the past Battle of Hogwarts in which she fought); all of these are aspects that really contribute to a great post-Hogwarts story.

Her encounter with Marcus Flint was both intriguing and shocking, and while Katie is quick to judge him, she isn't entirely at fault as he has been a particularly shady and unsavory character back in the Hogwarts days. I do like how Katie seems to be completely repelled by his actions and appearance, and that it seems that she has no wish to ever meet him again, not even a spark of curiosity. At least that's what I felt. It makes the whole scenario really realistic, actually.

And that was such a cliffhanger of an ending! I really did enjoy this story so far and I hope you update it soon :) I'll be keeping an eye out for this ☺

-teh

Reviewer: fleurdevinci
Date: 05/30/13 18:29
Chapter: Mac the Knife

Oh please keep writing! Ok, that was desperate, but honestly I adore your stories.They're one of the reasons-if not the main reason-I created an account here, for I don't think I'll write anything other than reviews! XD Are you going to continue with PW&AS? What about those stories about Grindelwald and Andromeda that you once started?

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 05/08/13 18:17
Chapter: Mac the Knife

looks good already! Im a huge fan of your stories, so I'm really glad you are starting a new one. Plus Katie Bell has always been one my favorite side characters! Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: I remember you! Been trying to be grown-up recently but I found my old books and got sucked in again! Next chapter is in the queue :)

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