Reviews For Musings
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/02/13 22:25
Chapter: musings

Why did I never see this????????? I need to get on the site more often!

WOW! I loved this! It seems just like Luna, and I am so impressed. And, Jenny, you are one of those poets that can render me speechless, no matter how much you try to deny it.

I thought the structure was genius, by the way. And the simplicity of it made it so much more poignant. I especially liked the part where she described proof as "dull," and faith as "bright." I sometimes feel the same way... :)

Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 04/05/13 2:35
Chapter: musings

The way the words are arranged on the page is a major contributor to the effectiveness of this piece. The same sentiments arranged in long lines forming a plain rectangle would have much less sparkle!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I wanted to break up the thoughts, be unconventional; plain, block verses would have been too ordinary for a poem like this.

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 04/03/13 21:17
Chapter: musings

Sweet and very Luna-esque!

Author's Response: Thanks! Luna is so much fun to write as.

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