Oh my gosh, this is a beautful sonnet. I know sonnets are hard, because of the meter and whatnot...but this one pulls it off perfectly; every single line flows smoothly. And your language feels just right for the time, and the idea behind the poem is so lovely! :D
Sorry about the complete lack of constructive crit. You're just too good at poetry...
This is so fabulous. You really have the most wondrous knack of writing sonnets that flow beautifully. This lilted along leaving me adrift. *sigh*
Bad review is bad, but take it as read that I love this. ~Carole~
This poem reflects not only the startling (and sometimes unsettling) suddenness of "deja vu", but also the joy of unexpected fulfillment of a dear wish. Just a tiny moment in time, but nicely and clearly outlined.