Reviews For Lucky
Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 03/12/13 14:11
Chapter: Lucky

Yayayaya - Okay, why doesn;t this have any reviews. What is wrong with people. This is a lovely story. I like your Ludo, Sophie. He's much sweeter and less idiotic than mine, so I'm pleased he's with Andromeda. Seems a shame that she'll end up with Ted, really, ha ha ha.

The Quidditch match was a great idea to bring them together, but I am wondering what Ludo's dad would have told Druella. I can only imagine that's where Ludo got his silver tongue from.

I noticed this error. Oh, how predictable, Andromeda though.

You might want to italicise the 'thoughts' (although that's just my preference) but you've written 'though' instead of 'thought'

Lovely story ~Carole~

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