I really enjoyed this story. It's well written and I like how you were able to craft a slash story while still developing characters. That shows real understanding of writing.
Great job!

Author's Response: Thnak you very much for the review. I do think development and characterisation is a vital part of a story - rather than just writing something as a fait accompli, so I really appreciate you mentioning that. Thanks again ~Carole~

Ha!

I enjoyed this, Croll. See, I knew the pairing and had a faint idea of how they might get together but the journey was unexpectedly refreshing. You were a bit troubled by the out-of-control flow of your narrative. I'd say put that worry to rest. It swept me along like a storm. A very Irish, funny, blunt, Finniganish storm.

Yeah, glad it wasn't Finnegan or I'd have had to bodily uproot you from Great Britain and carry you off to the Lake Isle of Innisfree.

Okay I went a bit mad there, but I LOVED THIS.

~Natalie

Author's Response: FINNEGAN FINNEGAN FINNEGAN!

Uproot me, woman, I want to go to Innisfree and watch my honeybees.

Thank you so much for the review. I'm so pleased you liked it because it did rather get away from me. Yeah, a Finniganish storm!

Thanks again ~Carole~