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Reviews For The Betrayed

Name: teh tarik (Signed) · Date: 02/14/13 6:08 · For: Chapter 1
Oh, this is a really lovely heartbreaking poem. You've portrayed Remus and Sirius so well here - Sirius with his frustration and rage in Azkaban, and Remus at Sirius's supposed betrayal of trust. I love the image of Remus "blotting" out the memory of Sirius. A wonderful poem :) I can see why this won the challenge!

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