Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 02/15/13 10:52
Chapter: ...Ginny

I like this poem. It certainly makes sense that Ginny would wish to be anyone else, at this point in her life. Her previous problems (being the youngest, wearing hand-me-downs) were nothing compared to the incomprehensible disaster she found herself caught up in. This poem certainly deserves a review :)

Author's Response: *bows* Thank you for your gracious review! :) I certainly thought of Ginny when I saw the challenge, and I wanted to capture her young and naive mind in my poem, while still relaying the dangers around her. I'm very happy that you liked the poem. Keep reading!

Reviewer: RobinTheRed
Date: 02/08/13 15:49
Chapter: ...Hope

Not sure why, but your poem reminded me of this - "Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow; - vainly I had sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow - sorrow for the lost Lenore -
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named Lenore -
Nameless here for evermore."
Not a bad comparison to conjure!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am flattered that you would want to compare my poetry to more well-known poets. :)

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