Reviewer: GreenEyesLoveNeverDies
Date: 02/12/13 21:36
Chapter: Prologue: At The End

Brilliant PHENOMENAL i hope one day i could write like that

Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 02/03/13 11:55
Chapter: Prologue: At The End

Nicely done, gracefully written. The sentences flow smoothly and the details are just right. Not too much or too little introspection.

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