Argh now I feel so bad for my fanfiction "sabbatical" or whatever I'm supposed to call this, because it took me a literal age to remember where this was from! Either way, I still like this and there is a real lackadaisical rhythm that I (at least) read. I guess I could describe it as slow, but definitely not negatively. Lovely and perfect for me right now, at least when devoting to a 200 000 word story would just not work.
Author's Response: Thank you, opti! :) I was hoping you would remember this poem... And my goodness, where have you been in Poetry Anyone? I have so many new poems for you to critique! Just drop on by... Anyways, thanks for your review. It made me smile.