Chapter 3: The Transformation
Not quite sure where this is going, but we are a long way from the end of chapter one. Keep updating.
Author's Response: Right you are... ;-)
Please stay faithful to this story... I assure you that you won't be disappointed... :-)
P.S. Thanks for your reviews. It really means a lot to me.
Chapter 1: The Prison
I am loving this! I like how you didn't reveal who the prisoner was right at first, at first I thought it was Lucius until he thinks about his mother. And that cliff hanger ending! Now I can't wait until the next chapter. Great job!
p.s. Please don't abandon this story! Most of the best one's seem to never get finished. Shame, really. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your appreciation...
I will try to post the next chapter soon...
Hope you like it too...