Reviewer: dreamsnape
Date: 03/17/14 0:31
Chapter: Part Two

I really enjoyed this story. You were able to convey very nicely the love that Remus and Tonks felt for each other, and all the anguish, doubt and remorse that came along the way. It fit completely into the larger HP story, and you showed the characters as very true to canon. Good job. Hope you write more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review. I am currently on hiatus, but perhaps one day the spark to write again will find me. I still monitor my page and respond to reviews, but my hectic life has taken me away from writing. I do miss it. Feel free to peruse my author page. Thank you again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 01/21/13 5:39
Chapter: Part Two

Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 01/19/13 2:46
Chapter: Part One

I enjoyed this story, a canon-compliant expansion of a tense part of the Harry Potter saga. The writing is good; it flows well, without the straining-for-effect word choice that one often sees. I am looking forward to the rest of this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! This was my first attempt at Remus and Tonks, so your praise means more than you know. Part two is in the queue as we speak, so it shouldn't be long until you get to read it. Thanks for reading and reviewing and so happy you enjoyed it! :)

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