I would like to know more about Severus and Elizabeth's relationship.
Author's Response: If you read my story, It's All For You, I will get into some more information about their relationship. I'm steadily updating it on this site, but if you want to read the 25 chapters I have already finished, check me out on fanfiction.net.
Is that a Sleepless In Seattle line in there about Zoe being good at being 7 years old?
Author's Response: Haha! Excellent. Yes, yes it is similar to the quote from Sleepless in Seattle. I work in the film industry, so I do draw some inspiration from and pay homage to some of my favorite movies. It's exciting that you noticed! You're the first one!
A good portrayal of Snape as exasperated father. I was somewhat concerned in the beginning of this series, that Zoe migh morph in to a Mary Sue, but you have kept her as an imperfect but normal child.
Good Zoe. It was creative too.
Fantastic!! As always!! I love your Severus as Daddy stories!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! There are more to come!
There's no need for desperation--this is a perfectly written story that tugs at this father's heartstrings, reminding him of many past moments with his own daughters.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it touched you. Have a wonderful weekend!