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Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 02/09/13 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 6-Changes

How could you do this!?!?!?
First Harry and Ginny and now this!!
How could you be so mean! *sobs*
-Livie

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 01/23/13 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 5-Unexpected Events

It is your story, but for me the Harry/Ginny situation destroys all creditability.

Author's Response: If you follow me to the end you'll find out why.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 12/05/12 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Secrets

Not an easy story to read, with spurts of cohesive dialogue interrupted by elementary-sounding descriptions.

Be careful to keep in first-person as much as possible. Descriptions should flow without too many prepositional phrases. Write in active fashion, not passive.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/17/12 11:12
Chapter: Chapter 1- Unlikely Couples

Good characters, but not a lot of plot.

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 11/16/12 8:48
Chapter: Chapter 1- Unlikely Couples

Great, you really pulled me in with your original charactors.

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