Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/02/12 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 7 St. Stephen's Church

This I love! It very literally spoke to me!! Thank you!!

Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked it. I think it is the sort of subject that a reader will either like a lot or not at all. In this story Harry is braver than a lot of us would be, but that is his nature. It is so much easier to run away from our problems than to face them.

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 11/19/12 0:20
Chapter: Chapter 5 Volunteer Night

Love that Harry is getting information that may be useful to him to help him move beyond his past.

Off to add this story to favourites so I will get notifications of updates ...

cj

Author's Response: He's just getting started...

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 11/17/12 0:03
Chapter: Chapter 3: The American Visitor

Loved Pamela's comment, that Harry repeats to himself, "It is safe to talk ...".

cj

Author's Response: Thanks, and I loved that Harry had the guts to actually act on it.

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 11/12/12 13:44
Chapter: Chapter 3: The American Visitor

THis one is really fascinating. I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. It has been fun writing it, but certainly a lot of work.

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 11/12/12 13:44
Chapter: Chapter 3: The American Visitor

THis one is really fascinating. I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/12/12 10:43
Chapter: Chapter 3: The American Visitor

Interesting.

Author's Response: I hope it will continue to be interesting for you.

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 11/11/12 10:06
Chapter: Chapter 1 Infanticide

After having spent many hours here at Mugglenet fanfic perusing the many offerings, I thought I had had my fill of others' stories. I was pleasantly surprised, therefore, to find this one. It is an interesting premise, and as another reviewer has mentioned, very plausible in light of Harry's experiences as a child.

One tiny nit - as a baby does not take his or her first breath until *after* the sac of waters has broken, Harry's infant would not, in fact, have drowned, as its respiratory system would not have switched over yet, and would remain safely "breathing" amniotic fluid until the sac burst. However, I understand that it was Harry's dream, and he may be ignorant of such things. Besides, I realize that it is his fear that is important here, not the actual medical details

Off to read the next chapter ...

cj

Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story.

Reviewer: Snorkack
Date: 11/07/12 13:50
Chapter: Chapter 2 The Sign in the Plaza

Interesting subject. Is this really your first story? If it is, congratulations, it's interesting and easy to read and I'm looking forward to the rest of it - hopefully we won't have to wait too long!

Author's Response: It's my first attempt at writing fiction, and I'm finding it quite different from non-fiction or historical drama. I'm thankful to have found this site, which gives so much help from beta readers, moderators, and the reading public, not to mention the tutorial materials. Thanks for saying it's easy to read; I don't think I could write in a more convoluted style, but it is fascinating to see the many different styles that the authors have, and to try to learn from them.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/04/12 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 1 Infanticide

OOOH! Thank you. I say thank you because I've been trying to find a new story to read that I could a) like and b) connect to, and I think I've just found it.

The premise here with Harry being scared of fatherhood is so very plausible. He doesn't really have the greatest early role models around him, after all, despite seeing Arthur and Molly later. The first dream was disturbing (ish), but i could well understand why he had it because he used to be shut up below the stairs so his upbringing must be coming back to him. I want to grab hold of him and tell him that some of this is normal. (I have kids, and I can tell you I've dreamt I've left them somewhere, or forgotten I had them etc etc - wonder what that says about me - lol)

Your story suggests that he's going to find something deeper than worry over being a new dad, and certainly the persistence of the dreams is more worrying (plus he's not awash with hormones like Ginny).

Well done. i look forward to reading more.

~Carole~

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this offbeat story. The first dream is one that I had long before Harry Potter was ever written, and I didn't connect it with his own experience until after I'd started writing the story (if you can believe that!). All the dreams are collected from me and my friends and adapted for the purpose of the story. There was a cyber-glitch that caused my first chapter to break into two parts when I submitted it, so I have renamed those two halves as Chapter One and Chapter Two and have retitled them, as you will notice. This is my first story, which I wrote after reading and enjoying many other stories. It seemed that it needed to be written.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/31/12 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 1 Infanticide

This is something a little bit different. Interesting story.

Author's Response: Yes, it will be different, but, as they say, "Write what you know about". The rest of the story should be coming steadily.

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