Reviews For Just A Diary
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 12/05/12 18:02
Chapter: Just a Diary

It has! I love the repitition at the end of each line! By the way, you mispelled diary at the end of stanza three, I believe. And you better stay logged on because I'm about to read everything I haven't read already! :D

~Cris

Author's Response: Thank you. :) Your reviews have made my day!

Reviewer: alex13
Date: 10/27/12 10:53
Chapter: Just a Diary

Amazing!! I really liked the rhythm in this one! But what I really, really liked was how you ended each stanza. It really shows the progression of how Ginny thought about the diary and how she came to the realization that it was evil.
Again amazing! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to explore Ginny's feelings, and found that using simple language would help. I surprised myself with how well it turned out. :) It has to be one of my more favorite poems that I wrote. Thanks again for your review, alex13. And keep writing!

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