Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/26/12 23:28
Chapter: Chapter One: Trolleys, Trains, and Practical Jokes

This is great writing! I love Ron's kinda repeat of the Gryffindor thing, and I love the characterisation of them all.

Just a couple quick questions: what year is James in? Rose is a 3rd year, so Dominique would be a 6th?

I love the last sentence- "silently praying for bravery", double meanings FTW!

I can't wait for the next update! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thank youuuuu! :D I thought that Ron in the Epilogue was absolutely hilarious, so I had to incorproate that somehow ^_^ James is a year older than Al, so he would be a fourth year. Dominique is a seventh year. I am really happy you liked this! <3

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/26/12 17:45
Chapter: Chapter One: Trolleys, Trains, and Practical Jokes

Seems like a very down to earth writing style. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

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