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Reviews For Snape's Interlude

Name: barby03 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/15 14:10 · For: Chapter 1 A New Teacher
I really enjoyed your strory. Congratulasion! :) Thank you for writing it :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/27/13 13:58 · For: Chapter 11 End of Term
That was a great story. I enjoyed reading it. It was well written so even though I thought your Snape wasn't entirely accurate it was still good storytelling. Very sad how it all happened. I'll read the follow-ups and then your work in progress.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Fynnsmom. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and hope you enjoy the others as well.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/27/13 13:47 · For: Chapter 10 Cruel to Be Kind
That is just too bad. Severus did tell her that the whole affair would never be permanent. I also think Dumbledore had a point in that Winnie should play a part in the decision. I hope she wasn't trying to get pregnant.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/27/13 11:31 · For: Chapter 9 Shadows
You had lulled me into thinking that Winnie would be safe. I forgot what Voldemort could do. Why oh why did she reverse her birth control charm.

Author's Response: Thanks for all the comments-- it's so nice to get some! You made some good points, but seem to be enjoying the story anyway. I'm glad.:)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 17:26 · For: Chapter 8 His Dark Secret
I'm still surprised that Winnie never noticed Severur's Dark Mark--even if they were in the dark all the time. Unless it's totally black in the room, your eyes would eventually adjust and you'd be able to see things. I understand that it's part of the story though:D

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 17:08 · For: Chapter 7 Sweet Oblivion
I think that just having Severus read to me would make me feel better.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 15:15 · For: Chapter 6 The Holidays
I hope Trelawney's wrong. She's rarely right but you don't want the time that she's right to affect you. It's always embarrassing when someone hears you talking about them:D

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 14:57 · For: Chapter 5 Taking Care of Business
To be honest, I don't know how someone can spend this much time having sex--everyday? I think I'd get tired after a while and slow it down to 3-4 days a week:D Don't get me wrong. I'm not complaining about the story.

Author's Response: :) Really? I don't think so, not at this point in their relationship.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 13:19 · For: Chapter 4 The Question Game
Of course Dumbledore knew exactly what she wanted:D You are certainly showing a different side of Snape. I think it's true that we never know exactly what happens behind closed doors--when people are vulnerable and their true selves.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 12:52 · For: Chapter 3 A Boggart
Very interesting. I wonder how Winifred will feel when she finds out some of the things Severus has done. Or will she understand when Voldemort summons him? By this time Severus should have the Dark Mark. It seems odd that she doesn't have any questions about that unless she's very polite and doesn't want to cause any trouble.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 12:10 · For: Chapter 2 Ghosts of the Past
Looks like Dumbledore is matchmaking again--or maybe I should say meddling. I never thought about Snape's wanting to be the DADA teacher that way before--that Dumbledore was afraid to lose him because the position was cursed.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/26/13 11:42 · For: Chapter 1 A New Teacher
I suppose Winifred could assign a lot of homework and then spend her spare time grading papers:D I was going to start reading your new story and then remembered that I had written this story down as one to read so I thought I'd start with this one. Snape is my favorite character in the Harry Potter universe. I love stories when he falls in love. So far so good.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 12/03/12 5:35 · For: Chapter 11 End of Term
I was a good story, but I must admit it never felt like the real Snape. Well done anyway.

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the feedback.

Name: Lilliessevered (Signed) · Date: 11/18/12 1:03 · For: Chapter 1 A New Teacher
Such a great story.... I feel bad he will hurt her.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 11/12/12 11:43 · For: Chapter 8 His Dark Secret
I am starting to wonder how you are going to end this.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 11/07/12 9:28 · For: Chapter 6 The Holidays
I am beginning to wonder (even more) how this story will end.

Author's Response: Good. I hope you'll keep reading. Things will change...

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 10/29/12 6:23 · For: Chapter 4 The Question Game
Interesting story nut I am having difficulty in believing in this Snape.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 10/21/12 8:29 · For: Chapter 3 A Boggart
Is this the Snape we know and love?

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/24/12 19:34 · For: Chapter 1 A New Teacher
I wish there was more. I feel I just got started on a good story and it's over:D Good job.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 09/24/12 18:42 · For: Chapter 1 A New Teacher
Interesting start. Snapr does not seem very nasty.

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