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Reviews For The Coffin Brawl
Reviewer: Ascendio
Date: 09/15/12 23:20
Chapter: The Coffin Brawl

I really enjoyed this poem, at first I was afraid the parenthesis every other line might get over-bearing but you actually used them to a lovely effect. I particularly love the lines
"How tiny she is
(just a child).
Lain in a simple bed
(no, her coffin);"
but I do love the poem overall as well. Albus I'm guessing? :)

Author's Response: Yes, it is Albus! I'm am so ecstatic so receive your review! Thank you for your great words and I'm glad that you loved the poem! :)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/12/12 15:54
Chapter: The Coffin Brawl

Without the last line it could be anybody. It must however be Aberforth.

Author's Response: Well, Aberforth and Albus are both in the poem, but the main person is actually Albus, because he got punched at the funeral and Aberforth blamed him for the death. Albus took it calmly, and he too, felt at blame.

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