Reviewer: Theloonyhermione
Date: 09/15/12 21:22
Chapter: The Aquavirius Maggot

Awww, I loved it! This was good! At first I thought it was going to be a neville/Luna, which I wish would have happened, but your version of Rolf made me like Luna/Rolf more. But the second-to-last paragraph did make me sad. I do like how you made Luna call Xenophilius 'daddy'. I think that's cute and very fitting. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I can never personally think of Neville/Luna like the movies imply; I'm stuck in my mental state of canon (Neville/Hannah, Luna/Rolf)!

Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 09/11/12 3:33
Chapter: The Aquavirius Maggot

Aww! This was very cute, and I liked your version of Rolf! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Rolf was the character that I had to invent myself, so it's good to know that you like him!

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