Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 09/15/12 3:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

I've read your entire series and really enjoyed it! I'm glad you are continuing. Looking forward to the adventures in this series!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the favorable feedback. I've got a big adventure planned for their sophomore year! :-) Jenny

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/14/12 13:50
Chapter: Chapter 2: Menorca Holiday


Author's Response: Thank you! Nice to get positive feedback! :-) Jenny

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 09/14/12 0:37
Chapter: Chapter 2: Menorca Holiday

I'm not sure the construction of this chapter is as crisply written as previous installments. Too many uses of "when they..." to keep the action clean. In all, not bad.

Author's Response: I'm just writing this for fun. I hope you enjoy the big picture the story! --Jenny

Reviewer: Looneylovegood19
Date: 09/13/12 1:32
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

I am soooo glad to start reading the next portion i love your story soo much thank you so very much for writing it!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yay! It makes me very happy to read your enthusiastic response to the story. I just posted Chapter 2. Hope you enjoy it! Thank you, Jenny

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/11/12 18:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

Brilliant!!! I really love these fics!! Well done!! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoy my stories. I just posted Chapter 2. Hope you like it! --Jenny

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 09/11/12 16:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

HI, i've really enjoyed the fic so far and hope that you consider uploading the next chapter within the next week (because i'm incredibly
I hope you don't stop halfway through this fic like many others have, i get very frustrated!!!
good luck with your writing

Author's Response: I'm trying to post a chapter a week, so I hope that doesn't try your patience! I have completed every story I've started thus far, so I don't think you have to worry about me. Thank you for your nice review! --Jenny

Reviewer: AoifePotter
Date: 09/08/12 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

thank you so much for continuing the story ! i felt kinda sad when More Wandless Magic ended . i can't wait to see what happens in Menorca !

Author's Response: You're very welcome. This story picks right up where the last one ended, so nothing to be sad about. Thank you! Jenny

Reviewer: leftright
Date: 09/07/12 1:51
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

I'm so happy that you have continued the story!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. Keeps me motivated to continue writing. I'm going to try to post a chapter each week, and I've written about one fourth of the story already. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 09/07/12 0:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

So glad you haven't forgotten our WUP students!!! This storyline sounds quite promising. Keep up the good work and don't get too bogged down in maneuvering your character couples into romantic situations. The fact that Hermione and Draco have a project at hand is quite daunting at best!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I have the entire story mapped out, so there may be a bit of maneuvering. ;-) But I find a need a mystery to fill a story that takes an entire school year, so it won't be all romance. Thanks, Jenny

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