This makes a point that, if remembered by leaders throughout history, could have saved a lot of lives: sometimes the consequences of continuing a war are worse than those of either side winning it. If Voldemort had won, they could have simply left Britain, escaped to other parts of the world able to defend themselves. But it went on and on...very dark, but powerful. I'd take issue with some of the dialogue, people not really talking that way, but it's clearly symbolic and I get that.
Very very well written!
I thought I wrote a review earlier! I thought it was rather brilliant! Well done!! Can't wait to read more!!
To be honest, I did not enjoy it. But that was because of the power of the writing and the subject matter. Very different scenario.