I liked the beginning when it said that reading books is fun. I would have to agree there...
This is getting really good!!!!!!!! :D
I'm absolutely loving this! I really wish that I could write as well as you do!
Author's Response: aww thanks :)
This was also so good! I love how you put only two boys in Ravenclaw and that the rest are girls. I've never seen that in any other story before! Then again in the actual books, who are the other two girls in Hermione's year? Are there even any other girls? As you can tell by my name, I love Ravenclaw, so I loved that the main house in this is Ravenclaw. The only probhlem I found is that it felt a little rushed and that was at the part where they were discussing the riddle. Maybe Have the eagle door-knocker say the riddle so that the first years can have a feel for what it's like. Then once in the common room, the prefects didn't say much to the first years about the common room and stuff... Anyways, it was a very good read and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: yeah I'm having a bit of trouble thinking of riddles that would seem challenging enough! Thanks for the input I really appreciate getting reviews :)
I loved this! I can't wait to read what's next!
I am not quite sure what is going on here. Still, I am sure we will find out eventually.
Good. Perhaps a little short.
Great job! I like how Flitwick made an exception ^_^ Can't wait for more on Fred and George (George and Fred, haha ;).
Interesting characters, but I look forward to a bit more plot development.
Good job! Character developement is good and seems believable. I like the chimpanzee part! :D
Author's Response: haha thanks the chimpanzee was my brother's idea :)
It makes a nice change featuring other characters. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully there'll be lots more to come