I am not sure if this felt like an ending. Owl results come by owl post over the summer break.
Author's Response: right I forgot about that! thanks I'll fix that part
That's it? We won't see 4th year? :( Good ending with the patronus though.
Author's Response: thanks :) Don't worry - I'm going to write a sequel in a while
Oh my, powerful ending.
Author's Response: glad you liked it :) it can be tough getting dramatic parts right
This Chelsea mystery thickens. Update soon please.
Author's Response: haha don't worry I'm actually done writing it all now so I can update it right away
A bit short for my liking, but otherwise excellent.
Hey,I love this, please continue. The twins are great, Mason and Parker are so funny, and I'm so happy you introduced Luna. May be a little bit of Lupin?
Author's Response: thanks a bunch :) and yeah, a little DADA class would probably be good, there isn't many classroom scenes
A lot of good snappy dialogue, but is anything happening?
Good luck with that Julia....... I really like this story and I can't wait to read more. In fact I'm going to make you and this story apart of my favorites! :D
~cbrluvsravenclaw
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Author's Response: haha the monkey's just for a bit of randomness :) my little brother thought of it
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
Just wondering why you added the monkey to the story? It's very interesting and funny at the same time.
~crbluvsravenclaw
I liked the beginning when it said that reading books is fun. I would have to agree there...
~future author