Reviews For The Promise
Reviewer: hinny020
Date: 04/01/13 8:03
Chapter: The Promise

you should've let harry walk away and let ginny chase him further.. :DD

Reviewer: Crazy about Draco Malfoy
Date: 09/09/12 15:14
Chapter: The Promise

that was alright i suppose make it longer and i want some sexual intercourse in the story

Author's Response: thank you for your feedback... but i cannot help you with the sexual intercourse request. you're on the wrong website if you want that.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/16/12 18:24
Chapter: The Promise

I did not think it was very realistic, but well done anyway.

Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 08/16/12 16:11
Chapter: The Promise

I don't quite understand why you put the EWE warning in. This could have fit in canon. Good story.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 08/16/12 15:42
Chapter: The Promise

Hmmm...well....do confrontations of this magnitude actually occur in public places like this? Wouldn't Harry have cast the Muffliato spell or something similar? I don't know...seems too contrived to be realistic. Ginny's angry, indignant response was the most true-to-character bit in the whole piece.

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