you should've let harry walk away and let ginny chase him further.. :DD
that was alright i suppose make it longer and i want some sexual intercourse in the story
Author's Response: thank you for your feedback... but i cannot help you with the sexual intercourse request. you're on the wrong website if you want that.
I did not think it was very realistic, but well done anyway.
I don't quite understand why you put the EWE warning in. This could have fit in canon. Good story.
Hmmm...well....do confrontations of this magnitude actually occur in public places like this? Wouldn't Harry have cast the Muffliato spell or something similar? I don't know...seems too contrived to be realistic. Ginny's angry, indignant response was the most true-to-character bit in the whole piece.