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Reviewer: Dad
Date: 07/30/15 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Back to School

All things come to he who omly stands and waits. Nice to see this chapter, Sad in places but hope for the future. If you do an epilogue, I hope it would be several years in the future when it has all settled down. Whatever - Great story. Thanks.

Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 07/30/15 9:35
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Back to School

I'm so glad to see you back, Hannah. A fellow Slytherin! Thank you so much for adding a chapter to this great story.


Reviewer: kail420
Date: 02/14/14 13:34
Chapter: Chapter 13 - The End

great story.
but why leave an ambiguous ending, it's just so so...
not good

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's not actually finished yet, hence the lack of an ending - I've just been a bit spectacularly useless at finishing off that last chapter!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/09/13 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 13 - The End

I hope there is a happy ending for Adrian's parents.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 10/09/13 3:52
Chapter: Chapter 13 - The End

Intriguing! I need to know what Edward's been up to!

I really like this chapter and think you dealt with the fact of the Battle very well. It's very hard to write it from a fresh angle, so having Adrian hear about it from reports was a clever idea (plus he wouldn't have been there anyway :) ) I was sad for Summerby, too :( . (One small thing, though, which isn't wildly important, but ... Zach Smith was Quidditch Captain in year five and six, so I'm not sure they'd have changed - and I only know this 'cause I'm obsessed with Zach Smith)

UGHH, Theia really needs to listen to her sons. Samuel is obviously so much happier as a Muggle. He's bright, curious and brave, and it must just be such a great thing for him to be living in a world where he's appreciated, rather than pitied -sigh-.

Lovely story. This is such an original idea! But not much more to go - that makes me saaaad. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Ooh poo I hadn't realised that about zach Smith - I've had summerby the captain all the way through :s Iwill have to cconsider what to do about that. Possibly rewrite - possibly force jkr to. I'm not sure yet. Thank you for the review! I wasn't sure how to handle the battle but I decided that no matter how far he's come there's still no way he would have stuck around for it (or been allowed to) so going home seemed like the only option but then I had to actually figure out how on earth the people not there would find stuff out). I'm sad it's almost over - I wasn't sure it was going to get finished when I started! Hopefully you'll get a bit more info about edward in the next chapter but I'm struggling to it in a bot too info dumpyway at the moment.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/03/13 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 12 - A Step Too Far

Hoo-ray! Harry is here.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 10/03/13 10:38
Chapter: Chapter 12 - A Step Too Far

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! I wonder if someone has just turned up, a certain someone with a a scar ...

I've just realised something else I love about this story is that you correctly escalate the terror and violence. I've read a few stories recently where the Carrows Crucio everyone from September 1st, which didn;t happen ans Neville says they didn;t want to spill too much pureblood.

I hope Gemma is in the RoR - I'm scared for her -wibble-

Well done ~Carole~

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 10/01/13 16:43
Chapter: Chapter 11 - A New Direction

Whoa! Adrian's mum is so blind! I don;t trust her at all. Hmm, I do hope they don't find his dad and Samuel because I want them to be safe and happy.

I loved the confrontation with Carrow, and the violence when he was slammed against the wall shocked me. Also have to say I liked the conversations with Hector and Dincan who are doing their best to keep their heads down, which I imagine so many peoiple would want to do.

Cracking story. Keep going!!!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/14/13 14:47
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Tomorrow

Good to see this update. Getting really nail biting now.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 09/14/13 5:05
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Tomorrow

Yayayayayayyaya - It's baaaaaaaack.

Ah, Hannah, I'd forgotten how much I missed this story until you updated, and now I want to read it all again.

I love that Adrian has admitted he was wrong. Obviously we know he was wrong, but you made it so plausible that a nice person could get mislead because he's protective of his brother. And I'm very impressed that you didn't rush in with his epiphany but kept the tension going.

I'm worried about Gemma *wibble*. I hope they rescue her soon.

Hurry with next chapter (no pressure - ha ha ha) ~Carole~

Reviewer: PigwidgeonHP
Date: 04/14/13 9:32
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Conversations

This story just gets better and better :) I can't wait till you update again :)

Reviewer: PigwidgeonHP
Date: 04/04/13 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 8 - The Ministry of Magic

Wow! That was brilliant! You were certainly right about it becoming more dramatic! It was really inventive of you :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the reviews :) It's nice to know I have a fan! I really will get speeding along with the next chapter while I have a bit of time off work this week. ~Hannah

Reviewer: PigwidgeonHP
Date: 04/03/13 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Christmas

As brilliant as always and the plot is growing! This is really fabulous! Please carry on writing :D

Reviewer: PigwidgeonHP
Date: 04/02/13 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Birthdays and Broomsticks

This is still really brilliant! Well done! :D

Reviewer: PigwidgeonHP
Date: 04/01/13 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Try-Outs and Tribulations

This is truly brilliant! Well done! Please carry on writing :D

Reviewer: PigwidgeonHP
Date: 03/31/13 17:09
Chapter: Prologue - Breaking the News

Wow! This plot line looks fabulous already! Well done! I can't wait to read the next few chapters so please carry on writing :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :D I hope you enjoy the next few chapters. An update should be coming very soon!

Reviewer: John_Doe
Date: 03/11/13 9:27
Chapter: Prologue - Breaking the News

A very captivating story that shows another side to DH. Good job :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :D There should be another chapter coming very soon!

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 03/09/13 10:29
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Conversations

Good chapter. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) A new chapter should be coming very soon!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 03/09/13 8:48
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Conversations

Yayayayayayy - fabulous chapter!

This was very touching, Hannah, and I loved hearing Samuel's story through Adrian's words. You had a lot of information to give in this chapter - as in background - but you made it work. It was interesting, well written, and an integral part of the story. The other people's reactions were great. Adrian really should have had more faith in people, but then at the time he was struggling without any friends and with opinions I don't think he really believed. *sigh*

I think you need to write a spin-off or three. One with Edward and Samuel abroad :D ~Carole~

Author's Response: eep On this occasion I did actually forget to respond. But here you go, I hope this response is better late than never (I hope you are enjoying your hot lemon squash as well). Thank for the review :D I hope I'll have the next chapter up this week (so long as I can write it at some point). Things are going to change again but hopefully there won't be as much info-dump next chapter. ~Hannah

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