I really liked this and it's really good for your first poem! I am a new poet myself and I think you should keep going with poetry! I can almost imagine this being a song, it has that sort of rhythm to it.
This is very sad. I spotted a few errors (bare instead of bear), but this was fantastic. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I always thought that George would have a hard time living without Fred so it was bound to be sad, I will try to fix the error if I can figure out how :L
This is a very nice poem, especially for a first one. :) Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you I'm planning on writing some more now :) EL
Wow! Amazing Poem!~Nidhi
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot :) EL