Reviews For Red Currant Rum
Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 04/17/13 18:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a neat little story, nicely written. The first section (the prologue, you might say) is succinct but gives all the necessary background in a few short paragraphs with adept sentences and good word choices. In the second section, Rosmerta does not explain to her friend Caitlin why she is going to work at the pub, saying "You wouldn't understand." I'm not sure what was non-understandable. Caitlin seems to have known that Rosmerta didn't want to go back to an alcoholic father who ruined her life, and probably Rosmerta's sorry exam results were not a secret. (Or were they?) Maybe I'm missing something here. Was she hoping that she might see her father again someday if she worked in a pub?

The final section is sweet. Rosmerta's kind treatment of the impoverished woman shows that she still has a loving heart, even though she tries to be hard-boiled, and that fact that the reader can guess, partway through this section, who the old man probably is does not detract from that sweetness.

It was good to include the lines where Rosmerta asks herself if she wants to risk a reunion with her father. After all, she is nobody's fool, and she realizes that the reunion might not be what she hoped for. It would be out of character for her not to have these misgivings. But hopefully she and her father have both learned something over the years.

At a couple of spots in the second and third paragraphs of the last section, there was some alternating use of present and past tense, whether on purpose I don't know. But that's a tiny matter in an otherwise well-done story.

Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 08/15/12 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw! That was so sad and sweet! I'm glad that Rosmerta was able to forgive her Dad in the end. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it - I've been writing far too many depressing stories lately, I needed a happy ending for once. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/10/12 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Heart warming. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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