Reviews For Unforgivable Ron
Reviewer: forever_magical
Date: 08/17/05 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 4

this is so good. i have to ask, isthere more or is that it? but this story is really good. the percy thing made me happy because i really don't like him but neville kinda shocked me. but thats ok. nice job!

Reviewer: Bramber
Date: 04/21/05 20:37
Chapter: Chapter 4

this is beautiful. I'm tempted to ask you to continue, but I won't. It ends better this way, somehow. Thankyou for sharing!

Reviewer: Taurus
Date: 04/07/05 5:46
Chapter: Chapter 3

Ooh I especially liked the end where he found out Hermione was alright. I love anything R/H :)

Reviewer: Taurus
Date: 04/07/05 5:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, I this is a good story. It's so sad Neville is dead! I want to find out who Ron used the curse on.

Reviewer: Bramber
Date: 04/07/05 3:31
Chapter: Chapter 3

I like this a lot! you really make the moments feel... hmm, real? I like this a lot, tons of stories have been written surrounding times like this, but this is a perspective i'm not sure i've seen before, keep up the good work! I enjoyed this a lot!

Reviewer: doggstarr
Date: 04/05/05 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 3

You are a terrific scene-setter. This story is incredible I love how in canon you are with your handling of Ron's personality. Can't wait for chapter 4. Hope I don't have to wait aslong as I had to wait for last chapter lol. Though if you keep this standard of writing up I'll forgive the wait.

Reviewer: doggstarr
Date: 04/03/05 22:44
Chapter: Chapter 2

O.k. I know who the other DE was. I've just read Sincerely Yours Harry James Potter. You still got too update this though cos it's excellent.

Reviewer: doggstarr
Date: 04/03/05 22:14
Chapter: Chapter 2

Please update, this is a fabulous story I've kept coming back for months now, I so want to know who the other DE is it Snape. He is the only DE I think who would die with a look of anticipation, knowing at last his spying days for Voldermort are ended and he could be at peace , I hope it's not him though.

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion
Date: 01/11/05 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 2

I really really like your story. I hope the others are okay. Poor Ron, I feel sorry for him but atleast he was able to save his sister... Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. No, I really can't. Good job!

Reviewer: MereRanger
Date: 01/11/05 18:17
Chapter: Chapter 2

Keep up the awesome work. I want to know what happens next!!

Reviewer: Kairos Devan
Date: 01/10/05 12:51
Chapter: Chapter 2

Woah, very nice. I cannot wait until there is more. Keep going, you've got a great foundation.

Reviewer: kaiserzacc
Date: 01/09/05 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 2

It is interesting to see this event from ron's point of view...keep it up

Reviewer: Weasel King Fan
Date: 01/07/05 17:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this story-you really should add to it ; )

Reviewer: MereRanger
Date: 01/07/05 16:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wonderful! It's sad but really good. Please write more soon!

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