Reviews For Thrice Defied
Reviewer: expelliarmus17
Date: 08/03/12 4:54
Chapter: Prologue

Very intriguing! I look forward to reading the rest. The title implies that you'll go into detail about Lily and James's past defeats of Voldemort, which I have always been curious about. I like titles like yours, that say a lot with a little. I was slightly confused about the setting of the prologue, which I believe was intentional. However, I think a few more details would have given me a clearer picture without giving too much away. Also, there are a lot of little question mark symbols, you may want to look over the punctuation that you used.

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