Hello! :D Thank you for writing the full version, and thank you for letting me know! This is a fresh take on Charlie, and I love how you used the prompt to write about this life-changing moment. That was certainly unexpected. :)
Author's Response: Hello back! It is so nice of you to read and review this light little piece... to use your words, certainly unexpected! Thank you very much for taking the time to drop by and for the kind review. :)
I thought that this was a good way to portray Charlie. I have always wondered why he didn't go into professional Quidditch. Excellent story. Do you plan on writing a sequel?
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about a sequel at all--honestly, this story was inspired by a drabble prompt in the Three Broomsticks' Summer Dream/Nightmare Challenge, so it's already grown so much in terms of length/plot than I had originally anticipated. But never say never... who knows what bunnies will come hopping into my mind someday? :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Good short story.
Author's Response: Thanks!