You write first person Luna really well. And I like the birth date!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Luna is definitely good fun to write, so it's lovely to hear that other people like her too. And yeah, I though that the birth date was apt for Luna's sons. I mean, who else? Thanks again!
~Sophie
typically luna.... its lovely how u have included her dreamy tone right till the end... enjoyed it..
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Trying to get Luna's voice right is always an enjoyable challenge.
~Sophie
This is amazing!! I loved it! I love Luna sooo much, and I enjoy writing her. I am actually writing a next generation fic, in Lysander's perspective. You should read it! I hasn't been verified yet, but it hopefully won't take long. Again, I loved it! You have a real talent!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm very fond of Luna too and had a lot of fun writing about her. Good luck with getting your story accepted.
~Sophie
Thanks for such a sweet story about my favorite character in the HP universe.
Author's Response: Oh, you're more than welcome! I had such fun writing it, and it's really great to know that you liked it. Thank you!
~Sophie
Amusing and nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! That was exactly what I was aiming for.
~Sophie
I myself struggle while attempting to write Luna, but this was amazing! I love how they were born on a day that only comes around every other year--Xenophilius would probably see that as some kind of Dirigible Plum magic ^_^ Fantastic job, Sophie!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks Julie. Yes, I'm sure Xenophilius would be thrilled by the magical possibilities/implications of their birthdate. Luna would just take it all in her stride, I reckon. She does have a reputation of being hard to write, but once you've found her voice, I'm sure you'll be okay. And, actually, it's even better than you think. February 29th is only once every four years!
~Sophie
Haha! I just love Luna and her oddity's. Who doesn't? Love your fic!
~Nidhi
Author's Response: Thanks, Nidhi! Oddities are rather Luna's speciality, and I love her for them too.
~Sophie
Awwww. I love Luna. I especially loved the diatribe she had about her feet. Great story. And of course the twins were born on Leap Day.
Author's Response: Thank you, Krista! Luna is a favourite of mine, and I'm glad you like her too. Something as unlikely as having twins on February 29th could only happen to her, I guess.
~Sophie