Great! I hate to say this though, being the perfectionest I am (and also the fact we had a test on this friday), you used semi colons incorrectly. On either side there should be a full sentence that could stand alone, and the two should have some relation to eachother. At the end of this chappie, you used it like a coma, which is gramatically incorrect. Please fix this for me and any other perfectionists. Good job besides that! lol But the blood thing was rather disgusting.
Author's Response: Okay, I'll remember that in future. (At least I'll try). Thanks for review, and your explanation was weird, but weird is ok with me, and yes the blood thing was a bit gross. Haha.
Wait...why was hedwig carrying that letter? YAY ERROL! *cheers on Errol* Hermione's like a mini Mrs. Weasley! :D Omg, I luff the fans! They're hysterical!
Author's Response: I don't really know why Hedwig was carrying that letter. I like the first-year posse too. I think they're heaps funny. They only like her because she's famous. Thanks for review!
That was random. I like random :-) Good job! Keep up with the weirdness!
I thought it was very funny! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Cool. Feel free to read more. Thanks for review.
YAY! I'M FIRST! This is so hilarious, I almost died laughing.
Author's Response: Haha cool! Thanks heaps for review!
now they-re all insane! i love it. the poem was hilarious! off to next part...
Author's Response: Yeah, they all get insane. It's weird.
holy crap this is getting better and better..off to the next part..
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! It never gets too crap you know. I try to maintain a standard. Thanks for review!
*Laughz myself silly* sooo freaking funny
OH. MY. GOD. this is the funnies thing EVER!!!!!! one of my fav bits was “You’ll laugh, you’ll cry, it’ll change your life, I promise!” Hemione pleaded. ‘I’m not making any sense!’ she thought. ‘This girl is on crack,’ Snape thought. & The mufasa bit. LOL CANT STOP LAUGHING! u rule! i rated it a ten ofcourse :D :D
Author's Response: Cool! Keep up with the 10's. I need them, 'cause my rating has dropped to 4 stars. *sob and curl into foetal position* Mufasa is quite a big part of this story, even though he doesn't actually appear that much.
If he starts getting any uglier than Daniel Radcliffe we’ll know there’s something seriously wrong!” OMG! I was in hysterics! I think he is ugly! Rupert is so much cuter! James and Oliver are hot too! they are Fred and George for the people who don't know of their hotness!
So no Sarabi? What a shame! And Hermione's going to turn into a fame crazed monster too? Oh the Drama, post soon.
whoa. this story is starting to scare me....10!!!
Author's Response: Cool. I rate your review 10.
i like this chapter better than the last! keep up the good work!
ok im sorry 2 say... every chapter gets worse and more discusting. im sorry. maybe it appeals 2 other people.
Author's Response: Pfft! Ah well. I hope you keep reading though, just don't review because you're bound to give me a bad rating. Thanks for feedback anyway!
Hey! Funny Stuff, funny stuff. As for chapter 1 Id have to say I disagree about Daniel Radcliff (Sorry if I spell stuff wrong, horrible speller) I think he's pretty hott. But Ill give you a 10 anyways! Post soon!
Author's Response: I'm trying. It's in queue, unless they rejected it. I'll check...
Author's Response: NOOO! It was denied (access). I think it's because it was too short actually, thus, ARGH!
I think Dan Radcliffe is ugly! Rupert Grint is sooooo cute! Dan is scary! Anyway I loved the story. Rating:10
Author's Response: Cool. Rupert is really cool. I like Emma Watson the best, but lots of girls are like jealous of her or in denial about being jealous of her and hate her. Or some just hate her. Thanks for review!
Author's Response: F.T.L.O.G! Accept the post! ARGH! I give up.
