Oh, interesting. This is the house Slughorn was staying at, I presume. And Dumbledore pinched the knitting pattern - how cheeky of him! I loved the end, finding the moving picture - that must be perplexing for them.
Great idea for a story ~Carole~
Author's Response: Yes, it was Slughorn's temporary house. Thank you for reviewing; it means a lot! The next chapter should be up soon :)
Haha, that last part was so funny. I don't know whether this story is completed or not, but I hope you update another chapter soon!!!(:
Author's Response: Thank you!! It's not completed, and I just submitted my next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon!
I've no idea where this is going, but I shall follow and find out. Good on you for working with all original characters.
Author's Response: Thank you taking the time to read Chapter 1 and to write a review! You're actually the first person, who is not my mom, to review a piece of my creative writing. Please feel free to criticize any of my work so I can learn what I need to improve.