Reviews For Back from Vacation
Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 07/22/12 9:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, interesting. This is the house Slughorn was staying at, I presume. And Dumbledore pinched the knitting pattern - how cheeky of him! I loved the end, finding the moving picture - that must be perplexing for them.

Great idea for a story ~Carole~

Author's Response: Yes, it was Slughorn's temporary house. Thank you for reviewing; it means a lot! The next chapter should be up soon :)

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/20/12 1:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Haha, that last part was so funny. I don't know whether this story is completed or not, but I hope you update another chapter soon!!!(:

Author's Response: Thank you!! It's not completed, and I just submitted my next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon!

Reviewer: CanisMajor
Date: 07/19/12 2:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

I've no idea where this is going, but I shall follow and find out. Good on you for working with all original characters.

Author's Response: Thank you taking the time to read Chapter 1 and to write a review! You're actually the first person, who is not my mom, to review a piece of my creative writing. Please feel free to criticize any of my work so I can learn what I need to improve.

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