Reviews For Remembrances
Reviewer: GinnyPotter95
Date: 08/01/12 2:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh Sophie! This is brilliant! And so beautiful!

Author's Response: Good enough to make you review it twice, apparently! Thanks again, Nidhi :)


Reviewer: GinnyPotter95
Date: 07/18/12 5:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! Amazing poem! I love the rythem!~Nidhi

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Nidhi :) I played with the rhythm quite a bit, so I'm glad you liked it.


Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/18/12 3:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! I love the rhythm it had! I especially enjoyed how you wrote mem'ries!!!!!! Way to take out a syllable! That, right there, says poet to me!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review, Nagini. Ellision (abbreviating a word like that) is very useful for making words fit into the meter, but I'm not sure that ellision a poet makes :P


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