I'm sat here sobbing and I don't know what to say.
Fred and George captured perfectly. Heartbreakingly well. The teasing of their family members was done is such a honest yet loving way, and dead on how they'd think.
It was like you were channelling Fred and George
The closing lines: 'George looked away from the place he had just seen his twin and down to the place his twin was now, and always would be.
"Goodbye, Fred." ' perfect, understated, emotive. So simple yet so powerful.
I really have nothing else to say, excuse me whilst I go and find a tissue!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Sorry about the tears! I'm glad you enjoyed it though.