Reviews For The Latecomer
Reviewer: silverlining95
Date: 07/06/12 21:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm sat here sobbing and I don't know what to say.

Fred and George captured perfectly. Heartbreakingly well. The teasing of their family members was done is such a honest yet loving way, and dead on how they'd think.

It was like you were channelling Fred and George

The closing lines: 'George looked away from the place he had just seen his twin and down to the place his twin was now, and always would be.
"Goodbye, Fred." ' perfect, understated, emotive. So simple yet so powerful.

I really have nothing else to say, excuse me whilst I go and find a tissue!

Fenella x

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Sorry about the tears! I'm glad you enjoyed it though.

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