Oh, this is interesting! I'm not usually someone who enjoys AUs or stories with Book 7 disregarded tags because I enjoy the books so much that I have them imprinted on my mind. However, this is certainly a decent take on events if Harry had decided to go back to Hogwarts. I can certainly see that Professor McGonagall would have wanted him back to both protect him and provide a morale boost for the other students, and as the Ministry appears not to have fallen in your story, then Hogwarts would have been as safe a place as any for him. I suspect his warning letter came from Draco, which is a great idea. We see some glimmers of redemption in him when he fails to kill Dumbledore, so I'm hoping he'll be more active in his rebellion and will help Harry when they all arrive at Hogwarts.
Getting the Dursleys to use the Floo to The Burrow was a brilliant idea. Oh my, I can just imagine the fireworks between Molly and Petunia! I did think petunia was a bit too quick to accept Harry's word for it that they were in danger; perhaps that section could have been expanded, but on the whole, I enjoyed this first chapter very much.
Will you continue it? ~Carole~
it was amazing! it was so well written:)