Reviews For Luminatis
Reviewer: Europa27
Date: 08/20/12 16:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

i have no words... thank you for such a wonderful fic...

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 08/16/12 3:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

I hope to see him someday soon.

Er, not too soon, I hope! That is, if you're talking about going to join him...

This is a wonderful story. I like how you've characterized Ron, how you've made him the last one standing but Ginny,

I have one quibble - with your math. If Rose is born in 2006to be on the train in 2017, then Ron was 25 when she was born. That means if he's 90, she's 65. And pregnant. Which is pretty good work, even for a witch. I think you need another generation in there - when my GGma was 92 I was 18. Almost time for a fifth generation...

Other than that and a tiny bit of phrasing at the begining this just goes from strong point to strong point. Good characterization of Ron, no lingering on things that are really outside the realm of the story (That is, no long explanations of how each of his brothers died...) a VERY good use of Dolohoff's curse to explain Hermione dieing before him, and of Voldemort's curse shortening Harry's lifespan to explain that - but, again, math, Muggles live to 92 all the time. A bunch of my grands lived to ninety. So Ron is still at a Muggle lifespan himself.

I really liked it. Really. So much that I am reccing it to my friend who adores Ron...

Good job!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/01/12 22:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story was so touching! I felt a little numb in some places, and my eyes teared up... It was beautiful. I myself lost my brother four years ago, to an unknown cause, and it was hard to live after that, but somehow I keep going. I am hopeful that I get to see him again, though it seems that I'm going to have to wait awhile to do so. :'( but I'll survive...

Author's Response: I'm so sorry to hear about your brother. Trust that he'll be waiting for you whenever your time comes, and until then, make the most of the time you have been given because it's a precious gift! :) Thank you very much for the review; I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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