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Reviews For Paint Her Black

Name: katylauren (Signed) · Date: 08/27/16 16:27 · For: The Heart of Black
THIS MADE ME CRY IT WAS SO GOOD !!!!!thank you for this!!!!

Name: The Other Weasley Sister (Signed) · Date: 07/27/13 14:48 · For: The Heart of Black
So good!!! I especially love the way you ended it! It was chilling; I have goose bumps!

Name: amaninakupenda (Signed) · Date: 08/30/12 2:16 · For: The Heart of Black
This is exquisite. So in character for both Lily and Sirius, and the exploration of the differences between Sirius's outward banter and all his inner tumult was really lovely. Of course, I love anything Sirius so I'm a bit biased, but the end of the story had me in tears!

Name: Prongs_Luver (Signed) · Date: 08/19/12 13:32 · For: The Heart of Black
This was so good! It made me cry at the end lol! I've always loved Sirius and so I loved this fic! :)

Name: Prongs_Luver (Signed) · Date: 08/19/12 13:31 · For: The Heart of Black
This was so good! It made me cry at the end lol! I've always loved Sirius and so I loved this fic! :)

Name: Gmariam (Signed) · Date: 07/09/12 11:46 · For: The Heart of Black
This was fantastic. I really, really enjoyed it. As a diehard James/Lily shipper, I almost hate to admit that I have a real soft spot for Lily/Sirius stories, and this was so well done I was almost rooting for them each time they came so close.
What I always enjoy about a good Lily/Sirius story is how they stay can in character even while coming together, and your story did that wonderfully well. I loved Lily's snark and attitude, and even more than that, I loved the depth you gave Sirius while still keeping his own bit of snark, alongside his loyalty to James. The imagery with the colors was also a nice effect, particularly at the end, which was really heartbreaking. We know Sirius was devastated by James's death; to think he was even more broken by Lily's is really tragic.
Anyway, I really enjoyed it and hope you write more Marauder Era because I think you did a great job! ~Gina :)

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 6:36 · For: The Heart of Black
This left me in awe! It was truly genius, how you split it up into colors, and explained each one. I love the premise of this story! Lily, like a rainbow, a pure white prism of color, whereas Sirius is devoid of all color, an abyss, and wishing to have color fill his life.
That last part titled Red was so heart-wrenching. I almost couldn't bear imagining Lily lying there! It totally gave me a chills and a sick swooping sensation in my belly. Golly, you can write! Keep it up! I definitely want to read more...

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