Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/15/12 3:31
Chapter: Oh Fred, you're dead!

No worries, I don't think anyone really Percy for what he did to his family. He might have made up with his family, but he will always be that right fowl git to me!

On the other hand, I really enjoyed reading this poem ore ode, as you put it. It was sad at most times, but you still cracked a laugh out a me at,

"Missed you so much he wed your ex
which is a little creepy."

Overall, good job!!!(:

P.S. I you enjoy poetry, I recommend that you read the poems by Nagini Riddle!!! They are really good. And if you don't mind, nominate "Her Hands" for best poetry before the 23rd. I really want her to win! You will see why once you read that poem... Thanks, bye!!!(:

~Cris!(:

Reviewer: PeppermintToads
Date: 06/29/12 22:10
Chapter: Oh Fred, you're dead!

This made me feel both sad and silly at the same time. I felt so sorry for Fred, but at the same time I was giggling about how Percy was described. I also liked the "Missed you so much he wed your ex/which is a little creepy" line--my friend and I had a discussion over that just a week ago! Thanks for both making fun of Percy and writing a funny poem.

Author's Response: Hello Peppermint Toads, I've often wondered if Angelina realised why George (probably) married her - but then, maybe it's the same reason she married him. Perhaps she never got over Fred after they broke up. Perhaps they cling to Fred through each other, in a manner of speaking. Crikey, that really IS creepy. Glad you enjoyed the conflicting themes in this ode! Thanks for R & R-ing, Kara's Aunty ;)

Reviewer: Ascendio
Date: 06/28/12 17:53
Chapter: Oh Fred, you're dead!

I actually enjoyed that a lot more than I expected! You had me chuckling, and the poem flowed brilliantly. Great piece.
-Annie

Author's Response: Hello Ascendio, the title is a bit macabre, so I can fully understand any trepidation in clicking on the title. If someone else had written this and I stumbled on it while browsing, I think I'd probably give it a miss ... So I'm glad you didn't! And I'm even gladder it made you chuckle :o) Thanks for R & R-ing, Kara's Aunty ;)

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/28/12 17:27
Chapter: Oh Fred, you're dead!

What a humorous poem! I loved it! Since I'm not a Percy fan, I totally didn't mind the wish to hurt him. :) teehee!

Author's Response: Hello Nagini Riddle, yeah, I'm still really miffed that Percy got life while poor dead Fred is lost to us forever.I can't even comprehend what life must be like now for Georgie ... Thanks for R & R-ing, Kara's Aunty ;)

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