Reviews For The Knot
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/25/12 23:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Knot

I enjoyed this first chapter. It presents a little different take on what happened when Severus discovered that Remus was a werewolf. Presenting Peter as clumsy seemed to fit him. And then he got caught in the moving staircase. That sounded like something he'd do. The only negative about this chapter was that it seemed to have a lot of typos and I had to guess what the word was. Otherwise, I look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for reading this. Yes, it's needs cleaning up. and I'll work on that. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

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