hmmm good...i think you need to speed it up a little ok?
Author's Response: Thanks. I will try- I think the Chapters will speed up as we go along; the first few are more of an introduction. Hope you enjoy anyway :) <3
Cute is the best word for lily. Please don't put her in slytherin though and update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Wait and see- the next chapter should be up soon, as its with my beta at the moment. <3
Thoroughly enjoyed this! I really like Next Gen stories and this one has grasped my attention haha! I like that this is Lilys POV! Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next post!
Author's Response: Thanks! I like next generation too- i feel like I can really make the characters my own because I can draw inflence from their families etc... who I know from JKR's brilliant work, but I can add my own touch to Lily and Scorpius. Next chapter should be up soon- its with my beta at the moment! <3