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Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 06/12/12 0:42
Chapter: One-Shot

That was lovely! There were so many things I enjoyed about this, but most of all...
YOU LET NEVILLE BE HAPPY!
I'm shocked, really. ;)
That said, you did give him a wicked hangover but at least you fixed him quick. I loved Harry's bit about checking out the trouser shop, that was priceless. And of course Hermione just conjured flowers out of thin air! I only wish they could have used magic on Hannah's hair, but I think she must have looked beautiful as it was.
The scene with her dad was lovely, the vows and kiss were perfect. And the last lines just made me grin even more.
You have a wonderfully light touch with characters, with details, with humour, and with flow. It was just so enjoyable to read that now I want to write a happy wedding. Wonderful job!
~Gina :)

Reviewer: The owl
Date: 06/11/12 16:58
Chapter: One-Shot

Aw, Jamie, you just made me cry. Then after all of the beautiful fluffy (in a good way) romance, those last two lines were so funny! Do you know exactly what Harry did in the end, or is it entirely up to my imagination? I loved this so much that I had to let you know. I may come back and review properly later, but right now I can't bear to pick it apart. Now I need to go and read it again.

~Sophie

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 06/11/12 11:35
Chapter: One-Shot

The postscript is so funny!

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 06/11/12 5:15
Chapter: One-Shot

Aww, this was absolutely adorable.

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