Reviewer: GinnyPotter95
Date: 08/31/12 21:51
Chapter: Mulciber and the Mudblood

Mary's dead?
Oh no!
~Nidhi

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out. :-)

Reviewer: GinnyPotter95
Date: 08/12/12 15:43
Chapter: Mulciber and the Mudblood

Hi Megan!
I love your story so far!
~Nidhi

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for commenting. This is my opus, but it's coming in slow chunks, so I'll try to get this up as quick as my muses let me. ~ Megan

Reviewer: turquoiseturkeyz
Date: 06/14/12 0:29
Chapter: And So It Begins

I liked the descriptions when you started off but somewhere on the train your details started rushing away in hast for the next event. It was fantastic, but please take your time. Love is all the more wonderful when you have to wait for it.

Author's Response: Thank you for the critique. I felt like it was descriptive overload at the start of the chapter, but I'll keep in mind what you said as I work on the rest of the story. ~ Megan

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/12/12 1:49
Chapter: And So It Begins

I like it!! Can't wait for your next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading it! ~ Megan

Reviewer: Snidgetgirl
Date: 06/11/12 23:25
Chapter: And So It Begins

Yes! First review! I thought that this story was so believably written, it wouldn't surprise me if something like this were to happen. Great story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
*Cailee

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm writing them as fast as Lily and the gang let me, so hopefully chapter two will be up soon. I'm glad you enjoyed this. ~ Megan

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