This was brilliant! And I absolutely loved the poem.
What did James mean by so did i .....eeeeeewwwwww
great story! i loved your poetry!keep up the good work!
Great story! It's rare you find somebody who can characterize James really well, and the poem fit perfectly. wonderful job!
I loved this!! Sometimes short stories are better then long things. I loved the way you put in the poem! I also give you full marks!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. :)
Ahh......That was so cool. I really liked the way that you incorporated the poem (which was excellent too) into the story. Nicely done!! Full marks!!!
Author's Response: Wow, full marks. :)
Thats good. Interesting the way you used the poetry. well done.
Author's Response: Thanks. I've seen lots of people do song-fics, in which they associate a storyline with the song's lyrics, but I thought maybe somebody should to it to a poem's for once.
Interesting. Personally, I like the poetry part. I also like how this is different then other stories in a way. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I only wish I'd written the poetry too. :)