Reviews For Becoming a Dad
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/07/08 14:51
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

This was brilliant! And I absolutely loved the poem.

Reviewer: Luna582
Date: 09/16/07 18:51
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

What did James mean by so did i .....eeeeeewwwwww

Reviewer: coolcat456
Date: 07/30/07 21:03
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

great story! i loved your poetry!keep up the good work!

Reviewer: michieceramic
Date: 11/26/06 16:02
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

it's nice.

Reviewer: Queen97
Date: 07/03/06 14:56
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

Love it!

Reviewer: HPLOVEER
Date: 05/13/06 16:44
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

how cute!!

Reviewer: Just Tink
Date: 04/18/06 15:01
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

Great story! It's rare you find somebody who can characterize James really well, and the poem fit perfectly. wonderful job!

Reviewer: DragonGirl
Date: 04/02/05 10:03
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

I loved this!! Sometimes short stories are better then long things. I loved the way you put in the poem! I also give you full marks!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. :)

Reviewer: Saphira
Date: 01/08/05 17:00
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

Ahh......That was so cool. I really liked the way that you incorporated the poem (which was excellent too) into the story. Nicely done!! Full marks!!!

Author's Response: Wow, full marks. :)

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 01/07/05 11:36
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

Thats good. Interesting the way you used the poetry. well done.

Author's Response: Thanks. I've seen lots of people do song-fics, in which they associate a storyline with the song's lyrics, but I thought maybe somebody should to it to a poem's for once.

Reviewer: Arina
Date: 01/06/05 22:20
Chapter: Becoming a Dad

Interesting. Personally, I like the poetry part. I also like how this is different then other stories in a way. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I only wish I'd written the poetry too. :)

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