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Reviews For The Runaway

Name: baby54boomer (Signed) · Date: 06/11/12 0:21 · For: Chapter 1
You have set up the story very well. The terse interaction between Hermione and Robards is quite palatable. I sense several layers of meaning in the multitude of reactions at the Ministry: with Harry and Ron, Seamus, and especially the Auror Director. As for Malfoy...nicely done! I look forward to watching the storyline unfold.

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought that the interaction between Hermione and Robards was well done - they're both quite logical people and in my mind, Robards is rather like Moody in terms of strictness, only with out the 'Mad' aspect! Their reactions will be explored more fully in subsequent chapters, I promise :) Thanks for reviewing ~ Alice

Name: UnicornDraconis2234 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/12 21:33 · For: Chapter 1
This is fantastic! I wish I could write stories as well as you can! I cannot wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review! I really hope you enjoy the next chapter ~ Alice

Name: dragongurl (Signed) · Date: 06/05/12 11:41 · For: Chapter 1
Wow! I really like the way that Hermione is written in this fic. She is very logical and not super emotional-a trait that a lot of authors forget. I can't wait to see what happens between her and Draco! Thanks for the long chapter and keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my version of Hermione - characterisation is very important to me, so I'm glad you thought it was good. Yeah, I always think of Hermione as a very logical person who sometimes lets emotions get in the way, not the other way round. I hope you enjoy the latest chapter! Thanks for the review :) ~Alice

Name: PaigeeeLorrenn (Signed) · Date: 05/31/12 19:28 · For: Prologue
This looks like it's gonna be such a great story! Keep it up, can't wait to see how the plot develops :) keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review - I'm glad you're liking it so far :) I hope you like the newest chapter ~ Alice

Name: BookWorm530 (Signed) · Date: 05/22/12 1:33 · For: Prologue
Interesting intro...can't wait to see when Hermione enters the plot. Keep it up : )

Author's Response: Thanks for the review - I hope you like my version of Hermione and the first interaction between her and Draco ~ Alice

Name: Melina Malfoy (Signed) · Date: 05/15/12 21:36 · For: Prologue
Alice! Hooray, you're back with another story- one with a riveting first chapter! Oooh, this is going to be good. I hope my sweet Little Dragon will be okay!! Looking forward to the next chappie! :D

Name: dragongurl (Signed) · Date: 05/15/12 4:02 · For: Prologue
Oh, this looks like its gonna be great!

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