It fantastic!!! Love it!!
Thank you! I keep checking for updates!
Sooooo great!!! I can't wait to see what happens with this!
I read the first chapter of this story some time ago and then found it again yesterday. The quality of the writing is first class, but I am afraid I find your Hermione a bit wimpy. Still need to follow it now to find out what really happened to Draco.
really enjoyed this chapter and can tell it's very important in the plot! so exited to read the rest of the story and hope it stays at this standard :)
good luck with your writing and i hope the next chapter is uploaded soon
Yea another chapter! It keeps getting better. I really thought it was good that you showed Hermione struggling over how she 'should' feel. It is interesting how people can cling to what is safe and comfortable instead of going for their true passions, which may be more unsure and unpredictable. Excellent as always and I can't wait for the next one!!
Oh wow!! Crazy reaction there!! Fantastic! And I love your Luna!!
The opening section at the party was a bit confusing given the amount of lapsed time since the last installment. Bringing some sort of closure to the HG/RW relationship was a good transition, though. The dialogue with PP/TN/BZ was quite amusing: taking them down "memory lane" via the Non-Disclosure?? Brilliant. The use of "MudBlood Granger?" Not so much. Theodore Nott's apparant leadership role? Interesting, considering Blaise Zabini's prior status in Slytherin House. I hope you post the next chapter more quickly: you've left your readers dangling with the very last paragraph!!! Good job!
HI, i've really enjoyed the fic so far and hope that you consider uploading the next chapter within the next week (because i'm incredibly
I hope you don't stop halfway through this fic like many others have, i get very frustrated!!!
good luck with your writing
Author's Response: Don't worry, I've submitted the next chapter, it's just in the queue at the moment! I'm sure the mods will get to it as soon as they can! I've written the next few chapters of this story and have plotted out the rest until the end, which I'm determined to see this fic through to! I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hope you also like the next instalment :) ~ Alice
Please could you upload the next chapter soon, i've really enjoyed this fic!!!!
Well done :)
Ohmigosh, girl! My chest was tight the entire chapter!! The tete-a-tetes between Draco and Hermione are deliciously tense, and at the same time, heartbreaking. I felt so badly for Draco as he heard of his role as a Death Eater and the one charged with Dumbledore's death- how horrifying it must be to learn of the kind of person he was. And, through all of this, you still make him damned sexy! My hat's off to you, hunny- another great chapter!! Luv, Stef :)
I'm still liking it! I have a soft spot for a redeemed Malfoy/Leo. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you still like it :) And I think I have a bit of a soft spot for Leo - but Malfoy's got to come back eventually and when he does...well, I think there'll be less playful banter and more angst! I hope you enjoy the next chapter :) ~ Alice
Great story! I'm always excited to see an update posted! Send a new one soon... can't wait to find out what happens next!
p.s. It would be interesting to see the story from inside Draco/Leo's head...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review - the next chapter's being beta'd! Unfortunately, everything I've written so far is from Hermione's point of view, though I may do some latter chapters from Draco's, I had planned on doing them mostly Hermione's - if only that I want Draco's head space to remain a mystery, both as Leo Wyvern and when he finally regains his memory! I hope you still continue to enjoy the story. ~ Alice
Love it! I think you are developing them both at a great pace! I cried a little at the part about Dumbledore :-)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like the pacing and I'm sorry the Dumbledore bit made you cry, but it's always nice hearing you managed to provoke an emotional reaction :) I hope you enjoy the next chapter and thanks for your review ~ Alice
Brilliant and well written. Never thought I'd be a Draco Malfoy fan... But I'll tell you what...I'm a fan of Alice Mac! Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, yay! I'm glad I have a fan! Thanks so much for the review - the next chapter is being beta'd and I'll put it up as soon as I can :) ~ Alice
You write really well! I like your subtle build up of the story. Can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad the pace is all right for you, I just want to make it as realistic as possible for a Dramione. I'm just getting the next one beta'd at the moment - I'll get it up as soon as I can :) ~ Alice
The entire psychological balancing act is sometimes overwhelming and I commend you for the clarity of storyline! You are creating a rather interesting aura of tension in the unraveling of Malfoy's life at Hogwarts: Hermione's POV is wonderfully rich! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's quite difficult staying true to the character of Draco Malfoy while making him actively nicer at the same time. What I'm going for is a sort of Malfoy without the inbuilt prejudice - but, of course, he's wrestling with his own mind, trying to retrieve memories that he can't get a handle on. I hope I'm doing a competent job at expressing that! Thank you so much for reviews, I really enjoy hearing what I'm doing right and wrong. I hope you continue to enjoy the story :) ~ Alice
This is an amazingly well written story. Love the humour, I laughted out loud quite a few times and I like the tension between "Leo" and Hermione. Their bantering is amusing and insightful. Good job, post more chapters soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's well written and funny! I think it's quite difficult to write humour so I'm glad it gave you a laugh! As much as I love Leo and his playful banter and snark, I can feel Malfoy coming back soonish, I think. I'm not sure how he's going to feel about joking around - initially, anyway. I hope you enjoy the subsequent chapters. Thanks for the review :) ~ Alice
The build-up is a bit slow, but it is only making me more excited for the rest! Great job again and I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know it can be a bit slow at times, but I wan't to make the pacing as realistic as possible for this pair. There will be a fair few moments between them in the next few chapters, however - some flirty banter etc. I hope you continue to enjoy it :) Thanks for you review ~ Alice