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Name: Gmariam (Signed) · Date: 05/22/12 1:41 · For: Chapter 2 -The Best Man
Again, I like how you've put the flashback at the end, giving us more yet not everything yet. Nice structure. I also enjoyed seeing Lavender and Blaise, it's neat how you've made them your own.
But more than anything, you've made Romilda jump off the page and she is a b****!! Wow, she is just awful to Seamus. It's subtle, and I'm glad he didn't roll over and take it all, but good Godric, what does he see in her?? Poor Seamus, he doesn't deserve that, not after the hints you've left us. Nice dynamics going on here between your characters, well done! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Seamus is caught up with Romilda. I think he's in a bit of a daze and wanting escape. Plus she's hot and 'good in the sack' - ha ha. Yeah, she is a bit of a b***h here, and I did feel a little guilty about doing it because there's a part of me that wanted to redeem her (much as Jess has done), but no one else fitted into the story quite as well as Mildew - sadly :(

Thanks for the reviewwwww. ~Carole~

Name: Lost_Robin (Signed) · Date: 05/21/12 22:35 · For: Chapter 4 -Stag Night
I like the story. I'm rather curious why Romilda is marrying Seamus.

Author's Response: Mwahahahahahahahah - Yes, I had hoped people would wonder why she's so intent on marrying him :) - Thank you for reviewing. ~Carole~

Name: silverlining95 (Signed) · Date: 05/21/12 21:18 · For: Chapter 4 -Stag Night
Oooh I'm intrigued! Can't wait to find out what Romilda, or Mildew, has gone and done now!

I love the continuation of Lavender and Blaise as a couple, 'Lavender Blue' is one of my all-time favourites so it's great to see them popping up amongst your other work :)

The dynamic you've established between Seamus-Parvati-Dean and to a lesser extent Lavender is remarkable, they seem like a real group of friends, with their inter-woven loyalties and misunderstandings.

I can't wait for more! Seamus can't marry that awful girl :(

Fenella x

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the lovely review and especially the kind words about Lavender - I ♥ that girl so much! Pleased you picked up on the dunamics between the three and also Lavender. I need a core for it to work and am puzzling it out in my head and on the page. Thanks again - Carole~

Name: Gmariam (Signed) · Date: 05/10/12 2:46 · For: Chapter 1 -The Wedding Planner
Nice start! Having read your other Seamus/Dean/Parvati stories, this looks really interesting, seeing him with Romilda. Obviously there is a lot of backstory with Dean and Parvati and the baby and I look forward to seeing what exactly happened that drove them apart. It was neat getting glimpses, and the jump back to a happy time with Parvati at the end was very teasing, especially between the necklace and the title of the story. Good luck as you continue! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: I hope the time jumps weren't too clunky. I was trying out something a bit different, and nearly put the past bits in present tense, but it didn't seem to flow as well. Thank you so much for the review, Gina, means a lot to me. ~Carole~

Name: Ruchira_M (Signed) · Date: 05/09/12 11:10 · For: Chapter 1 -The Wedding Planner
Hi, great opening, I don't know how you juggle so many stories together. and I love the shrieking reminder, it reminded me of Hermione's Homework planner.
(btw, my bestfriend is called Anusha. i wonder what she would say to her sharing her name with Dean and Parvati's daughter!:P) I haven't read the other stories you mentioned, so I am properly confused about why Romilda dislikes Dean and what partnership Dean and Seamus had and who Seamus' ex was, but I hope to find out as the story progresses,

Author's Response: Ohhh, I changed the name of the baby at the last minute (the original name had the wrong origin D'OH!) so I'm giggling a little at how I hit on a name you knew well - ha. The reason Romilda dislikes Dean should be clearer in chapter 2 and the identity of Seamus' ex is also revealed. The business they had isn't wildly important to this story, but basically 'The Foolhardy Boys and Parvati, too' was written for a mystery competition, so I had them setting up a detective agency.

Thank you ~Carole~

Name: Karaley Dargen (Signed) · Date: 05/08/12 17:07 · For: Chapter 1 -The Wedding Planner
AEEEEK What is going OOOON? I love the idea you had with the organiser. It's a very Potterverse thing with the shrieking, and it fits Romilda somehow (not because of the shrieking but because she wants to plan Seamus' life). I'm still a bit confused about the various relationships at work here and when everything happened, so can't wait for more chapters!

Author's Response: I hope the various relationships become clearer. I was trying out a slightly different style by not presenting it all chronologically, but didn't want it to appear as flashbacks, exactly.

Glad you like the organiser. I had Hermione's homework planner in mind as I wrote it - ha ha.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. This is a bit of an indulgence of mine, so I'm not really expecting much love from readers ~~Carole~

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